Happy New Year everyone!
Old news? I'm still writing, which is great news. I'm at 5000 words on the third novel. The outline has really served me well, and I'm on track to finish the first draft around Q2 2020 (sorry for the corporate-speak).
New news? I picked up VR art again, but I'm treating it as a hobby. I make "shitty vr art," and that's okay. Painting and sculpting in VR space is a lot of fun. And it works also as a writer since I get to listen to audiobooks.
My workflow in VR art and writing has been complimenting each other. Experimenting and trying new things pushes your limits. The more you create and finish, the more you learn about the craft and pick up things along the way. Finishing something sends the art for critique, and sometimes we're afraid to finish because some people might deem it a failure.
Even if you fail, you come out with the boon of knowledge and experience.
Success is learning from your failures, and failure is not learning from your mistakes.
Or, as what master Yoda said: the greatest teacher failure is.
Keep writing and making art!
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Tuesday, January 14, 2020
How I Build My Outline (as of Jan 2020)
To preface, this method is as of January 2020. Things might change, as they usually do, but I like this method.
I’ve been organizing an outline for the third novel I’m working on, and I wanted to share my method of building it. I’m borrowing concepts from the “Snowflake Method” and “Scene & Sequel” but changed it to fit my preferences. So, here it goes--
Step 1: List out all the possible endings and/or climaxes of your story
There are well known writers who start with an ending in mind: JK Rowling, John Irving and Stephen King to name a few. Having a possible ending will help you form the structure of your story.
But instead of a single ending or climax, I advise to have multiple ones. This will give you options on what the story can be. For example:
Step 2: Write down the Final Act of the story in the form of a question
With the possible ending and/or climax in mind, write down the final act in a form of a question. This question should be close-ended, which means it can only be answered with a yes or no. But don't write down the answer just yet. That will come later.
For example, in the ending of *Lolita*, Humbert fails to get Lolita back, murders Q and drives around town willie-nillie like a lunatic. The final act question could then be formed as “Will Humbert get his sanity back after losing Lolita?” Or: “Will Humbert get Lolita back?”
Another example, in the ending climax of *Sirens of Titan*, it is revealed that Salo has been manipulating the humans all the time to get a certain space part so he can repair their ship. The final act question could then be formed as “Will Salo return to Trafalmadore?”
Once you commit to an ending or climax, then proceed to the next step.
Step 3: Write down the First Act of the story in the form of a question
Now that we have the final act down, write down the first act in a form of a close-ended question. This question is the “hook” for your readers, the question that gets them intrigued and curious. For *Lolita*, it was “Will Humbert ‘get’ Lo?”. And for *Sirens of Titan*, it was “Will Mal escape Rumfoord’s prophecy?”
The first act question will be answered at the final scene or sequence. This scene will be the first plot point of your story. When the act is resolved, it must complicate things for the character. In *Sirens of Titan*, the answer is NO as Mal is abducted by Martians which is part of the prophecy. In *Lolita*, the answer is YES as Humbert ‘gets’ Lolita, but Lolita becomes hostile towards H. But don't write down the answer yet since there’s more opportunity to do so later.
As the first act is resolved, then the next act explores the complication and consequence of the outcome...
Step 4: Write down the Middle Act or Acts of the story in the form of a question
With the first act’s resolution and complication, write down the middle act in a form of a close-ended question. In *Sirens of Titan*, things get complicated for Mal as his memories are wiped out and is renamed Unk. So, the question is “Will Unk remember who he really is?” In *Lolita*, Lolita is becoming more hostile and secretive towards Humbert. So, the question is “Will Humbert maintain a relationship with Lo?”
The middle act question is the bridge between the first act and final act. You can have a single middle act, so you’ll have a traditional 3 Act Structure. But you can have more than one if the story needs to.
There will be a lot of tinkering with the three act questions until you arrive at something you’re happy (and excited) with.
Step 5: For each act, write at least 10 scenes in the form of a question
Now that we have a solid 3 Act or Multi Act structure, write down the scenes for each acts. Each scene must try to answer the act questions until ultimately it does. The final scene answering the act is usually the plot point.
These scenes will be in the form of a close-ended question, and we’ll finally get to answer them. There are two types of questions that can be asked within a scene: an outcome question, or a dilemma question. An outcome question will have a "yes/no, then complication" answer. A dilemma question will have a "choice A or choice B answer."
Here are the types of answers for an outcome question:
To increase tension and suspense, you can tease the scene with a number of “maybes” before resolving the scene. For example:
Your outline should look like this:
This step is optional. For pantsers, you’d want to give yourself a lot of space to improvise on each scene, so this step does not concern you.
Here, you’ll basically make notes, add details, do commentary or whatever you want for each scene. The format should look like this:
A bit dramatic to call it “infinity”, but it’s somewhat apt. As you build your outline, there will be moments where you’ll get stuck. The reason you get stuck is because there are aspects in your story that needs to be fleshed out. These aspects could be characters, world building and plot holes. In these moments, you must switch to your story bible and flesh out those aspects to push your outline forward.
There are a lot of resources out there on what a bible is and how you format it, so I won’t go into detail.
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So, the end result should look like this:
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I’ve been organizing an outline for the third novel I’m working on, and I wanted to share my method of building it. I’m borrowing concepts from the “Snowflake Method” and “Scene & Sequel” but changed it to fit my preferences. So, here it goes--
Step 1: List out all the possible endings and/or climaxes of your story
There are well known writers who start with an ending in mind: JK Rowling, John Irving and Stephen King to name a few. Having a possible ending will help you form the structure of your story.
But instead of a single ending or climax, I advise to have multiple ones. This will give you options on what the story can be. For example:
- Possible endings/climax:
- What if everyone dies except for the villain, and the villain is given a choice to revive everyone?
- How about the villain is defeated, but the MC gives the villain to redeem themselves
- Or everyone dies, and make it a tragedy...
Step 2: Write down the Final Act of the story in the form of a question
With the possible ending and/or climax in mind, write down the final act in a form of a question. This question should be close-ended, which means it can only be answered with a yes or no. But don't write down the answer just yet. That will come later.
For example, in the ending of *Lolita*, Humbert fails to get Lolita back, murders Q and drives around town willie-nillie like a lunatic. The final act question could then be formed as “Will Humbert get his sanity back after losing Lolita?” Or: “Will Humbert get Lolita back?”
Another example, in the ending climax of *Sirens of Titan*, it is revealed that Salo has been manipulating the humans all the time to get a certain space part so he can repair their ship. The final act question could then be formed as “Will Salo return to Trafalmadore?”
Once you commit to an ending or climax, then proceed to the next step.
Step 3: Write down the First Act of the story in the form of a question
Now that we have the final act down, write down the first act in a form of a close-ended question. This question is the “hook” for your readers, the question that gets them intrigued and curious. For *Lolita*, it was “Will Humbert ‘get’ Lo?”. And for *Sirens of Titan*, it was “Will Mal escape Rumfoord’s prophecy?”
The first act question will be answered at the final scene or sequence. This scene will be the first plot point of your story. When the act is resolved, it must complicate things for the character. In *Sirens of Titan*, the answer is NO as Mal is abducted by Martians which is part of the prophecy. In *Lolita*, the answer is YES as Humbert ‘gets’ Lolita, but Lolita becomes hostile towards H. But don't write down the answer yet since there’s more opportunity to do so later.
As the first act is resolved, then the next act explores the complication and consequence of the outcome...
Step 4: Write down the Middle Act or Acts of the story in the form of a question
With the first act’s resolution and complication, write down the middle act in a form of a close-ended question. In *Sirens of Titan*, things get complicated for Mal as his memories are wiped out and is renamed Unk. So, the question is “Will Unk remember who he really is?” In *Lolita*, Lolita is becoming more hostile and secretive towards Humbert. So, the question is “Will Humbert maintain a relationship with Lo?”
The middle act question is the bridge between the first act and final act. You can have a single middle act, so you’ll have a traditional 3 Act Structure. But you can have more than one if the story needs to.
There will be a lot of tinkering with the three act questions until you arrive at something you’re happy (and excited) with.
Step 5: For each act, write at least 10 scenes in the form of a question
Now that we have a solid 3 Act or Multi Act structure, write down the scenes for each acts. Each scene must try to answer the act questions until ultimately it does. The final scene answering the act is usually the plot point.
These scenes will be in the form of a close-ended question, and we’ll finally get to answer them. There are two types of questions that can be asked within a scene: an outcome question, or a dilemma question. An outcome question will have a "yes/no, then complication" answer. A dilemma question will have a "choice A or choice B answer."
Here are the types of answers for an outcome question:
- "Yes, but…" The scene is resolved positively, but a complication or consequence arises because of it. An example: Will Katniss be safe from the reaping? Yes, but her little sister is drawn as tribute instead.
- "No, and furthermore…" The scene is resolved negatively, and things get more complicated or things escalate. An example: Will Luke defeat Vader? No, and furthermore his hand got chopped off and he learns that Vader is his father.
- "Yes, and furthermore…" The scene is resolved positively, and there are rewards after it. This scene is usually the good ending of a story.
- "No, but…" The scene is resolved negatively, but there is a reward or a boon after it. This scene is rare, and it portrays reversals in stories.
To increase tension and suspense, you can tease the scene with a number of “maybes” before resolving the scene. For example:
- Will Luke defeat Vader?
- Maybe YES as Luke has a fighting chance
- Maybe NO as Vader slowly shows his skills and prowess
- Definitely NO as Vader cuts off Luke's hand, and FURTHERMORE Vader tells Luke that he is his father
- Will Luke join his father, BUT betray the rebellion and his friends? Or will Luke refuse his father’s offer, BUT die as a consequence?
Your outline should look like this:
- Will Luke defeat Vader?
- Maybe YES as Luke has a fighting chance
- Maybe NO as Vader slowly shows his skills and prowess
- Definitely NO as Vader cuts off Luke's hand, and FURTHERMORE Vader tells Luke that he is his father
- Will Luke join his father, BUT betray the rebellion and his friends? Or will Luke refuse his father’s offer, BUT die as a consequence?
- Maybe “JOIN” as death would be the other option.
- Definitely “REFUSE” as Luke is loyal to the rebellion and his friends.
This step is optional. For pantsers, you’d want to give yourself a lot of space to improvise on each scene, so this step does not concern you.
Here, you’ll basically make notes, add details, do commentary or whatever you want for each scene. The format should look like this:
- Will Luke defeat Vader?
- Maybe YES as Luke has a fighting chance
- Maybe NO as Vader slowly shows his skills and prowess
- Definitely NO as Vader cuts off Luke's hand, and FURTHERMORE Vader tells Luke that he is his father
- Luke should mention that Vader killed his father, and then REVEAL the truth!
- At some point Luke will fear for his life, so the scene should turn into a chase.
- Would this be PG? A hand getting cut off? Whatever.
A bit dramatic to call it “infinity”, but it’s somewhat apt. As you build your outline, there will be moments where you’ll get stuck. The reason you get stuck is because there are aspects in your story that needs to be fleshed out. These aspects could be characters, world building and plot holes. In these moments, you must switch to your story bible and flesh out those aspects to push your outline forward.
There are a lot of resources out there on what a bible is and how you format it, so I won’t go into detail.
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So, the end result should look like this:
- Act 1 Question: Will Jay finish his novel?
- Will Jay start his novel?
- Maybe NO as there's something on his laptop
- Definitely YES, BUT his battery dies
- Plant something about a virus or something...
- Will Jay buy a battery?
- Maybe YES as it's available in the store
- Definitely NO as his bank is empty, FURTHERMORE someone stole his identity
- Will Jay confront the hacker, but risk getting beat up? Or will Jay ignore the hacker, but suffer further with their attack?
- Maybe IGNORE as Jay is afraid of confrontations
- Maybe CONFRONT as Jay doesn't have any where to go
- Definitely CONFRONT as the hacker escalates his threats
- Will Jay get the hacker to back off?
- Definitely NO as the hacker is actually a robot from the future that needs Jay's help, FURTHERMORE Jay learns he's the main key to preventing World War Three.
- The robot should look like a human, but with a plasticy face...
- While Jay and Robot talk, an ambush happens.
- Act 2 Question: Will the Evil Corp kill Jay?
- Will Jay and Robot survive the ambush?
- Maybe NO as Jay is trapped in a net
- Maybe YES as Robot cuts through the net
- Maybe NO as Evil Corp blocked both ends of the alley
- Definitely YES as Robot punches through the wall, taking Jay with him. HOWEVER Jay and Robot fall through a hole.
- Will etc. etc. etc.
- Another will they etc. etc.
- Act 3 Question: Will Jay prevent World War Three?
- Yet another will they etc. etc.
- etc. etc.
- You get the point.
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Additional Reading
- Wrtiers who begin with an ending: https://www.flavorwire.com/401384/authors-on-the-importance-of-writing-the-final-chapter-first
- Outline of Lolita by Vladimir Nabokov: https://jonmayo.blogspot.com/p/narrative-q-lolita-by-vladimir-nabokov.html
- Outline of Sirens of Titan by Kurt Vonnegut: https://jonmayo.blogspot.com/p/narrative-q-sirens-of-titan-by-kurt.html
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